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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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Couple bits of feedback, firstly I would try and pick a key area and put just a liiitle bit more definition in to it. If you picked the top portion of that largest rock and defined a few actual planes and forms rather than just leaving it as texture, I think the piece overall would become much more convincing.
Second, I think softening the edges of the background rock would help push the depth of the image and show the separation between foreground and background a little better.
And lastly, I would watch your signature color and placement; right now it's so bright and crisp against such a dark area that it's becoming the primary focal area of the piece. You want your name to be visible obviously, but it's as much a part of the image as everything else, so I'd probably darken it down a bit and move it closer to one of the corners.
Overall though looking great, I love the shapes and reflections in the water! keep it up!
Thanks